Post by princessdiana92 on Dec 5, 2017 1:56:00 GMT
Hey crew!!! Me again, lil miss hog of the boards. 
Rohan asked me to submit his story as well for your critique. Please ignore the semi-finished thoughts throughout, lol... I bothered him about those but he will get there. I'm impressed since he's never taken any classes really with writing but seems to have a natural inclination toward it.
Critique away, and don't hold back!
xx ~ T
Rohans Story.pdf (426.13 KB)
Rohan asked me to submit his story as well for your critique. Please ignore the semi-finished thoughts throughout, lol... I bothered him about those but he will get there. I'm impressed since he's never taken any classes really with writing but seems to have a natural inclination toward it.
Critique away, and don't hold back!
xx ~ T
Rohans Story.pdf (426.13 KB)
