Sanctuary of Gods

[Charlie Allison]

This is a chapter from a collection of short stories I'm writing. I'm working on building atmosphere, chiefly--any ideas for helping me do that while leaving a fair amount off-screen?


God Sanctuary--Vasiri--Tybalt Olivia.pdf (68.96 KB)

Thanks, guys!

[justin1023]

Hey, I didn't realize you had posted this here. Already gave you feedback on this guy though